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Reviewer: rebe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2017 11:17 PM Title: The Monkey Puzzle Theory of War

claro que le pertenece a ela  me gusta y me encanta y la forma tan  divertida  como se deshiso de la intrusa ademas se nota la gran preferecia y preocupación de mark por ella que la final la rogona siga sobre el esa es solo otra historia estoy segura que encontro a mark con la princesa  me encanto exelente y bonita historia y me disculpo o la manera de expresarme pero yo soy un fanático de los dos  mark  y la princesa  los amo   gracias por esta lectura

Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2017 12:42 AM Title: The Monkey Puzzle Theory of War

Nice little mystety at the end..itsgood that moving on wasn't her with someone else. Fits Princesses character more. Mark... well they're teenagers only time will tell. Nice story. 

Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2017 11:34 PM Title: Lighter Than Air

Poor Princess, and its something that heppens in life all the time especially with teenagers. 

Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2014 11:16 PM Title: The Monkey Puzzle Theory of War

I noticed no one's reviewed this. Yeesh. I liked following this story from Jason's POV. You've taken away the shine of everyone being perfect and awesome and made Mark and Princess at least a bit more human. I've often looked at the Eagle/Swan thing that way, like everyone acted like the Eagle belongs to the Swan just because she likes him, and that he might not agree with that sentiment. It would be quite difficult in a team that works that closely together for one of them to see someone else while another pines, so I can see all the conflict avoidance making sense (and not wanting to be the bad guy). 

Anyway, I appreciated the variety from the usual. :) 

Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2014 12:02 AM Title: Lighter Than Air

I never liked the way that everyone seems to want to assume that the Eagle (in whatever version) belongs to the Swan because she likes him. I could see it going this way. 

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