Date: 05/01/2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
ROFLMHO!!! Beautiful work, a well-written story, and an incredible laugh! What more could I want!?
I like Mark's feelings towards Princess; he feels what he has is so special he doesn't want to exploit it.
Author's Response: Thanks, Candi. I don't write romance too often, but it fit for this story. Glad you liked it!
Date: 03/14/2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love reading stories where the team plays practical jokes on each other.
Author's Response: Hi Amethyst: Thanks for the review! You know, maybe we should ask for a way to group all of those stories together. You are right, there are some great ones out there. I appreciate you stopping by!
Date: 03/12/2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well that is one way to get him to admit it! ha! Well done. Nice mix of tension and humor...but leaves you wondering what Mark might do to his friends in retaliation. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Nephedra. Hmm ... a follow-up piece. I'll have to give that some thought. :)
Date: 03/10/2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
A nice blend of humor and emotional depth here! And I’m wondering now if Jason, while ostensibly out to pull a prank at Mark’s expense, might have been perceiving the big picture and how to provoke some much-needed revelations for both Mark and Princess...
Author's Response: Hi Iborgia88: Thanks for the review! Yes, I like to think that Jason sees the big picture more than Mark in this regard. I think Mark feigns cluelessness so well when it comes to Princess that he sometimes fools himself!