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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For The First Kiss
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Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2017 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hand me the tissue box.. lovely and sweet... heartbreaking. 

Author's Response: Hi, Ebonyswanne! How are you? It's been quite a while and I must admit that I had to be away from the fandom for too much of a long time now, when real life kicked in wildly. This notwithstanding, hope you and your lovely family are doing well <3 Thank you so much for your kind review .. you managed to reignite lovely memories :) When I write poetry I tend to tilt on the melancholic side but thankfully, this being fiction, there's always the chance to change things over and create a more happy ending :) Please take care. 

Reviewer: jublke Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

That is the saddest thing ever!!  Nice job moving our hearts on this one ... but can we have a happy love poem now?  <sniff>

Author's Response: Yes ... it really is sad, isn't it?!  I've felt my heart tightening even when I had been in the process of writing it!  But that's the effect that poetry has on me ... it pushes me to think and write malinchonically!  In fact, my poems almost tend to be this way!  But don't worry ... this is only just one of many sequels that one can come up with!  It doesn't mean that things had to go that way ... I, myself, don't want them to go that way!  Thanks for your review!  Some day I'll keep your proposal in mind!

Reviewer: Green Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. So few words, such incredible emotion, Marie!

Author's Response: Thanks, Green!  Poetry can say it all!

Reviewer: lborgia88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sad, but also touching and romantic.

Author's Response: That's what I have aimed at when writing this poem!  A never-ending love, sealed with a promise!  Sad times are full of deep emotions which can be shown more openly!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Madilayn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful and heartbreaking.

Author's Response: Poetry can play games on me ... it can take me where I don't want to go or else it can make me express what's most hidden and true!  I'm glad you liked it and thank you!

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

That's so sad, Marie!

Author's Response: I know!  I only had the courage to end it this way because I know it's not really what happened ... at least in my mind!  I can make up for the ending some other day!

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sweet.... 

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!  Just reviving it from a forgotten folder!

Reviewer: Springie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

WAH!! I'm crying here!! So sweet, but so sad!!

Great work Gatchamarie!



Author's Response: Thanks!  I forgot about this poem but I thought of adding it as I was managing my Account!  I think I had been in a rather sad mood the day I wrote it!

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