Date: 04/21/2010 6:20 PM Title: Lemonade
This was very cute! I was almost expecting the warriors to be the guys! I also thought that Galactor would show up! You had me fooled! Great work!
Author's Response: Ack, I know--it would have made some sense to work in an appearance by the proper villains of the series. But I was having so much fun keeping this a "strictly civilian" story that by the time I got to the decision point, I just kept things as they were. I am glad to hear that people have still enjoyed reading the story, even without a proper bad-guy/good-guy conflict. It did occur to me that this story might seem like something of a tease without that element. Hopefully not!
Date: 04/21/2010 11:06 AM Title: Lemonade
Okay, now I get it! When life gives you lemons... The title confused me at first.
It's an interesting look at how Princess would view a superhero squadron similar to her own. I like how she forgot about her whininess and began enjoying herself. Of course, I was wondering all along if that director really was from Spectra...
Date: 04/20/2010 8:54 AM Title: Lemonade
This was great! I loved it. I guess having 4 warriors come out and Princess as the replacement would have been too coincidental, but it was almost what I was expecting.
I think you need to have more late night pizzas.
Author's Response: I admit I thought about a fourth Warrior, but perhaps fortunately the dream was very specific that there were only three. I guess my subconscious likes quirks. And oh, an excuse for more late-night pizza!