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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For Lemonade
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Reviewer: kittenmommy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2011 12:09 AM Title: Lemonade

LOL!  I was just waiting for Spectra to show up...

 

Great fic! :D 

Reviewer: Springie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2010 6:20 PM Title: Lemonade

This was very cute! I was almost expecting the warriors to be the guys! I also thought that Galactor would show up! You had me fooled! Great work!

Author's Response: Ack, I know--it would have made some sense to work in an appearance by the proper villains of the series. But I was having so much fun keeping this a "strictly civilian" story that by the time I got to the decision point, I just kept things as they were. I am glad to hear that people have still enjoyed reading the story, even without a proper bad-guy/good-guy conflict. It did occur to me that this story might seem like something of a tease without that element. Hopefully not!

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2010 11:06 AM Title: Lemonade

Okay, now I get it! When life gives you lemons... The title confused me at first.

It's an interesting look at how Princess would view a superhero squadron similar to her own. I like how she forgot about her whininess and began enjoying herself. Of course, I was wondering all along if that director really was from Spectra... 

Reviewer: Clouddancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2010 8:54 AM Title: Lemonade

This was great!  I loved it.  I guess having 4 warriors come out and Princess as the replacement would have been too coincidental, but it was almost what I was expecting.

I think you need to have more late night pizzas.  



Author's Response: I admit I thought about a fourth Warrior, but perhaps fortunately the dream was very specific that there were only three. I guess my subconscious likes quirks. And oh, an excuse for more late-night pizza!

Reviewer: gatchamarie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2010 5:50 AM Title: Lemonade

What a day for Princess!  If eating a pizza late at night has that effect on you, you must surely make it a regular!  Thank you for cheering me up with your fic!

Reviewer: Madilayn Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2010 4:02 AM Title: Lemonade

I remember reading this a few years ago - but I can't remember where!!  Love it.  Sillyness, PMS and fun!

Reviewer: Amethyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2010 11:40 PM Title: Lemonade

That was hilarious! I think you need to eat more pizza late at night.

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