Date: 04/01/2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the amount of reason in this assassin's approach. The way she's always tried to kill only those considered deserving, and to make sure others understood why. It's interesting that in the end her family's bloodline wins out. Would love to see some glimpses of their future. :)
Date: 08/21/2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Meridian, this is great I like the introspective thoughts going through the "Devli Stars" head while she completes her assignment.
Did you intend to have Francesca change to a different personality when she doned the Devil Star outfit? Or at least have a different name - Stella Diavolo. Or did I misunderstand something.