Date: 11/11/2017 4:11 AM Title: After the Rain
decir ahaaaaa que pesado es esto pobre princesa cargar ella sola con todo eso terrible buena lectura felicidades saludos
Date: 04/04/2013 1:00 AM Title: After the Rain
Wow...excellent writing...very powerful. I read this a long time ago and never forgot it. The rest of the team handled Princess' situation perfectly. Very believable...I'm glad that jerk got what was coming to him!
Date: 05/24/2011 6:46 PM Title: After the Rain
muy bonita historia triste ymuy emocional me gusto mucho el arropamiento que tubo de todo el equipo esa solidaridad fue hermosa tanto que me salieron lagrimas
Date: 02/23/2010 2:19 AM Title: After the Rain
This is one of my favorite stories - and it is incredibly powerful.
The characterisations were completely spot on and only added to the power.
Date: 02/12/2008 9:41 AM Title: After the Rain
I felt so sad for Princess and it is written so well it was as though I felt her emotions.
Date: 06/18/2007 12:18 AM Title: After the Rain
I really enjoyed reading this story.
The flow of it was beautiful, and you conveyed the emotions that she was going through at trying to hide what had happened from the team and wanting to get revenge at the same time.
The reactions of the team was not over bearing, or took anything away from the story. They reacted in the way I would have thought.
It worked well for me and I'd love to read more of your stories.