Date: 10/07/2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Kentaro's POV here makes a good contrast to Nambu's in the first fic. I really like the background you've created for Red Impulse -it fits him and lends him depth and character. Thinking about it, it really make sense that he would have come from the school of hard knocks, unlike Nambu. It's interesting to see how, though they have the bond of some shared experiences, they are two quite different people.
Date: 09/04/2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such depth and feeling. You completely turn aroudn a man who is generally seen as a really bad father who abandons his family and then treats his son very offhand.
Instead you turn things on their head and make RI a truly caring loving man.
Date: 09/04/2010 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Kentaro Washio is a complex character on his own and you've given the right background to explain the man we came to know when we first saw him and continued to follow his actions. I'm curious to know where Nambu's thoughts are taking him ... well, we know where, but could there be something else involved?!
Date: 09/01/2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
You've certainly created a rough background for Kentaro, and it's surprising how claculating Nambu is bieng. A man who was his only friend in the service is now something to be used... and Nambu is jealous of his family. I wonder if that comes into play? Are you going to write a fic about Nambu usupring Kentaro's family while he's gone?