Date: 01/07/2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
UW.... Wow - I love that you've explained so much of Asandeh's cultural background here! It adds so beautifully to what you've explored in the IF.
I also love the pairing of Asandeh and Mercy, they have the exploration and newness of a couple, the desire to work at the relationship and to understand each other. They are a 'real' couple whose happy ending will come about through give and take and compromise rather than a fairytale 'predestined' quality.