




Date: 04/10/2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a clever story! Great job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!





Date: 01/11/2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
That's a great read! Well done.





Date: 01/09/2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, that is a riot! I agree with Springie, you hit the nail right on the head. Oh man, that is exactly how it would play out. Thanks so much for the giggle :)





Date: 01/07/2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love Pawn Stars and this is just perfect! You really nailed Rick, Corey, Chumlee and the Old Man's speech! I felt like I was watching the show! I did notice that you abbreviated Science Ninja Team to "SNJ" in a couple of places. If I'm not mistaken, it should be "SNT". Oh...and the self destruct on the vehicles was a really nice touch! Thanks for the laugh!
Author's Response: Oops! A couple of typos slipped by. Thanks for pointing them out; I'll take care of that.