Date: 01/07/2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love Pawn Stars and this is just perfect! You really nailed Rick, Corey, Chumlee and the Old Man's speech! I felt like I was watching the show! I did notice that you abbreviated Science Ninja Team to "SNJ" in a couple of places. If I'm not mistaken, it should be "SNT". Oh...and the self destruct on the vehicles was a really nice touch! Thanks for the laugh!
Author's Response: Oops! A couple of typos slipped by. Thanks for pointing them out; I'll take care of that.