Date: 08/23/2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Can't believe that I forgot that to leave a review on this one! You both have created something very interesting, with the whole poly-themed society, and the rituals that go along with it. I have a bad feeling, that even though the girls are sisters and they get along, that in the end things aren't going to go down well between the two of them sharing the same man. Looking forward to an update!
Author's Response: Hi RB. There's still a ways to go, so we'll see....
Date: 12/11/2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well I read it all in one go. I like the idea and Kerri falling for Jaze - I don't know if you planed it but I expected it before the Enthrallment with Jessie. I loved the way Jaze is such a gentleman and the little snippets we're getting of his past. Then again we all know who he is. For our Condor it must be shear agony.
I do however find myself speed reading whole paragraphs. I guess I want to get the the romantic stuff but it's so intimately entwined with Spectra on the planet and the final show down your preparing us for, I feel a big issue just waiting to happen in the wings between Jessie/Jaze/Kerrie.
I'm not sure how you're going to reintegrate Jason into the team, especially with one Imprinted and one Enthralled woman at his side. The children side plot is developing into a major stumbling block, as will be pologimy when he returns to earth.
I can't wait to see how this ends.
Author's Response: Hi Lyssa. We're glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 10/06/2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
The plot thickens. :) And yeah, that dynamic between Mark/Jason (and Ken/Joe) makes the team all that more effective!
Author's Response: Yes, it does. Might hate each other for a moment, but don't threaten one or you'll get the other as well.
Date: 03/27/2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loving the story so far. Just one question, is this a chapter repost. I'm asking as I already have this chapter and wondered if it might be. can you maybe let me know, I would appreciate it if you could.
I'm gad you're enjoying the story and you're right, this isn't a new chapter. I have been trying to post chapter 5, but am having all kinds of problems with Gatchfanfic. I hope to have it posted in the next few days.
Date: 09/10/2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am utterly hooked on this story! However, I do have one problem: the wait between chapters is AGONY!
Author's Response: Hi EW. Glad you're enjoying it. The reason for the delay is the chapters are posted in Bird Scramble first, which is done quarterly.
Date: 03/27/2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning of a very interesting story! Both of you are doing such a wonderful job and I can't wait to read more, especially to see how Jason will react around the sisters! The true Demetrian nature seems to be holding back in all three, until now ... can't help wondering if it would eventually unleash itself as they'd be in each others' company!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Marie. It's taken on a mind of its own. As for Demetern nature...*wanders away whistling*
Date: 03/22/2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
You two have finally began the Demeter storyline you wanted so desperately to add to the IF!
I hope it works out this time - as I said eight months ago it is a very interesting idea, it just wasn't fair on the OCs involved, so I am glad you are finally getting the opportunity to explore it!
Author's Response: No this is a storyline that uses ideas with both had well before the IF and incorporates some of the work that was improperly shut out of the IF due to temper tantrums. We have been working on this story for a while and have been sharing it in BirdScramble first.
Date: 03/21/2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
You've certainly set up an intriguing premise here! I'm curious to see how Jason will react to being in his 'natural environment', especially as he understands the dangers. It seems that he's headed for a relationship with both sisters... but know you guys, you've got some great plot twist coming up. I can hardly waitt!!!!
Author's Response: We'll never tell!