Date: 07/04/2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
es una lectura hermosa la siento triste en el momento en que la princesa se sumerge en sus pensamientos y compara las ocasiones en que siempre mark se escapaba de un compromiso se puede sentir el dolor en ella al ver a mark con sherri hojala que tengan un hermoso fin y no solo un beso y fueron felices por siempre un gran amor merece unexcelente final felicidades y esperamos pronto la segunda parte gracias por esta bella historia.........
Date: 06/01/2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Such a fun read, and your illustrations bring it that much more to life! Heh, figures that Sherri would be a blond -they're always causing trouble in the Gatch/BOTP world- but Derrick is the real mystery...
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it, LB! Yes, those blonds are trouble, aren't they? ;-)
Date: 05/30/2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hey! He disfrutado mucho esta nueva historia, como me encanta esta pareja la disfruto mucho más, así que espero más de esto muy pronto, animo! =)
Me gustaría poder decir más, pero el inglés no es lo mío, así que hasta tu proximo capítulo.
I have enjoyed this story so much, so i will waiting for the next chapter, i love this pairing you know? I would like to tell you something else, but english is not my first language and is difficult to me, so, please update soon! =)
Author's Response: You're doing great with your English! I am so glad that you are able to read and enjoy my fic! Thanks so much! Updates coming soon!
Date: 05/30/2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
I told you I was eager to read this fic, and I'm very glad to have done so as soon as possible!
You managed to keep me smiling all the way because, like you, I so like it when our favourite couple fight like kids, foreseeing a very happy ending! I can't wait to read what happens next!
I didn't trust Dr. Moss from the very beginning! But, perhaps it's just because he's not Mark and he's the wrong person to date Princess instead of the Eagle! And, I don't blame Sherri, at all ... well, having the very big fortune to have our handsome Eagle by her side, even if for just a second, is not something she'd throw away so easily! Thanks for a great read and compliments for the lovely, accompanying pictures!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it, Marie! Predictable, but I hope it reads like and episode somewhat. Yeah, I agree with you...I can understand Sherri's temptation by being paired with the Eagle!
Date: 05/29/2011 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ooh, this is getting exciting! You just know that when the Eagle and the Swan look at other people outside the Team that it's going to turn out badly, but it's so sad when we know that Mark and Princess really just want each other. OTOH, knowing you, Mark will leap to a daring rescue!!! :-D
I can't wait!
Author's Response: Yep- easy to predict, isn't it? I still enjoy it when they fight- it makes the "making up" part that much better! ;-)