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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For A Night to Remember
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Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2017 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

One thing I forgot yo mention. I found it believable for them to work out their problems snd stay together.( Ken and Jun.) Not everyone leaves after those kinds of issues arise, hurts and love isn't all logical. ( From a relationship counseling POV.) If Ken  was " normal family man." After being in prison. I would have questioned it. Good work... I read the story twice. I amost gave them a therapy plan. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Ebony, so glad you enjoyed it :) That therapy plan actually sounds like a good idea, you should write it and post it here too :P

Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2017 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a ride. I can see Joe going over the edge. He could become darker too. A lot of heavy emotions throughout. I can see Ken unable to settle after everything that happened. Post trauma reponses... good story. Thank you. :) 

Reviewer: Springie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow...this was very bittersweet...in my mind Ken and Jun belong together, but it's hard to think of Ken treating her the way he did. And poor Joe...I kept hoping I'd read that it wasn't really Joe doing those things...and either Katse in disguise or a goon had taken his place. Great romp into a very angsty world!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review Springie. I certainly put them all through it, didn't I? As for Joe being replaced by Katse, or goon or whatever, I thought that would be a bit over the top, since the story covers many years, and IMHO any Galactor would have been discovered before the end of the first chapter for it to be believable.

Reviewer: rebe Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

uuuuuuuufffff es una gran historia a mi punto de vista algo cruel muy idiota ken por su comportamiento pero bueno me hubiera gustado mas el hecho de que jun tuviera un poco mas de dignidad y lo mandara a volar  no debio perdonar eso porque seria como permitir un desquite  le felicito gracias por esta lectura

Author's Response: Thank you for reading it and submitting your review. I love reading peoples comments on my work, and I agree, in some respects Jun may have otherwise finished with Ken for such behaviour, but they have been through so much together that she wants to see that he really is sorry for his misdeeds first,

Author's Response: Thank you for reading it and submitting your review. I love reading peoples comments on my work, and I agree, in some respects Jun may have otherwise finished with Ken for such behaviour, but they have been through so much together that she wants to see that he really is sorry for his misdeeds first,

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well they've certainly been through their share of issues! I'm glad Ken finally got his head screwed on straight, but sorry that it took such extremes for it to happen. And poor Joe... it seems odd that he'd end up that wa, but I can see him developing an obsession about Jun, just as he had his obsession about Galactor killing his parents. 

In a way, I think of thiss as a sad ending, with Joe dead and Ken so mistrustful, and the prostitute potentially carrying his child. Still, I could see how all of this could play out in this manner... I just hope it didn't. ;-) 



Author's Response: Thank you again for your comments. I've never been keen on 'Happy ever after' endings, so I'm leaving it up to the reader to make their own minds up if things work out for them or not......

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

An unfortunate result  for Jun, but unfortunately necessary if she is to remain on the Team. I enjoyed seeing this look at what could happen if Ken finally gave in to his feelings for Jun.!

Author's Response: Thank you for your possitive feedback. This is just one of many possible outcomes I'm sure. I couldn't make it too straightforward for them though, I think that would have been boring and predictable.

Author's Response: Thank you for your possitive feedback. This is just one of many possible outcomes I'm sure. I couldn't make it too straightforward for them though, I think that would have been boring and predictable.

Author's Response: Thank you for your possitive feedback. This is just one of many possible outcomes I'm sure. I couldn't make it too straightforward for them though, I think that would have been boring and predictable.

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