Date: 07/06/2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
The Condors dysfunctional love life. People are strange creatures at times and its surprising what works out for some people. Worlds made up of people with different values.
I found Joe heartless when it came to Jun, caring only for himself in it and the instsnt satisfaction of a sexual fantasy than what would happen to her relationship with Ken from sleeping with him. He was dismissive. I wonder if Ken ever found out... poor Jun now living with a lie in their relationship.
Date: 11/22/2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
You've really nailed the dysfunctional dating-type relationship. (Back when I was working on my Bachelor's degree, I ended up being the friend the wounded parties would call in the dead of the night. Not fun.) I just hope you aren't drawing from personal experience!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review EW. I kind of "borrowed" from many friends experiences and mixed them up a little bit!
Date: 10/08/2011 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Intersting... I'm presuming there's more to come? How sad for Joe, that he's unable to build a proper relationship. And how sad for Melanie, that she had to take her second chance and throw it away with both hands. I'm hoping there's a resolution here, but I'm not sure what it could realistically be. Things have gone too far...
Author's Response: There's more, but I'm not saying anything at the moment.... Other than I'm trying to be a bit kinder to Joe than I was in my first fic. I love him really. ;P