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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For Falling
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

very nice. I like to think it would be just like that.

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting mix of fear, confidence and reluctant acceotance... and I'm not even entirely certain whose POV this is written from!

Reviewer: Daniella T Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice! Again, goes to prove that you can have excellent quality without quantity! Also, second person writing --which for me is verrrrry difficult -- was very appropriate here...

Reviewer: Amethyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice little vignette. I like how this could be any one on the team. It is also the perfect second person, present tense story: short and sweet.

Reviewer: Clouddancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is great Catherine.  You use so few but exactly the correct words to capture that moment of free fall.  Not that I have ever skydived but I am sure I have felt something similar when I am flying, or on a roller-coaster. 

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Short and sweet, Catherine. I've always thought freefailing 10,000 feet would be terrifying. I've never skydived and never will.

Reviewer: ghost owl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant snapshot of that moment of suspension between falling and flying. I actually hate that part when practicing stalls, where you spend a couple of seconds in free-fall and then the nose dips, physics looks up and goes, "Oh, you're back," and the wings start working again. You've captured that to perfection.

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