Date: 03/25/2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm... I'm all for a threesome, and I can totally see the heat of the moment thing going on, but I'm with Joe on this one. Why would Ken 'allow' Jun to reguarly be with Joe when he and Jun are supposed to be in love? And as for Jun, I can see how she'd be curious about Joe, but after the 'playtime' I'm not sure why she'd want to keep teasing him like that. It's cruel to Joe and calloous to Ken... I'd like to think of the Swan as being more caring and classier than that. It just doesn't seem in character for her.
I suspect there's something much more going on... maybe Jun and Ken are worried about Joe, in some underlying way... maybe they're sensing something's wrong with him (this leading up to his brain injury toward the end of the first series)... I'm looking forward to seeing what you are going to with with this!
Author's Response: A case of " be careful of what you wish for" ? I'm exploring the aftermath and potential repercussions of such an arrangement. I'm so glad to have aroused your interest!
Date: 03/20/2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I confess that I'm hoping for once, they can make a happy trio. Otherwise things might go badly. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment, so glad you enjoyed it, but can you honestly see such an arrangement going well?
Date: 03/18/2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh KT, I didn't know if I should smile or cry for them! Despite their saucy behaviour, to me they seem more vulnerable and fragile in this fic! Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, your comments are very much appreciated. As much as I wanted to have fun writing it, and make it fun to read, I couldn't ignore the potential problems such behaviour can create.....
Date: 03/13/2012 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow oh wow oh wow! I simply MUST look through the posts to find you exact inspiration...somehow I never expected anything that could set off the smoke detector!
Author's Response: try TJ's "had to get this out" thread, pages 90/91.... you wanted to use the big guns if poking didn't work! Glad you liked it anyway :P