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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For Mum's The Word
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Reviewer: rebe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

muy buena escritura felicidades  es una muy buena historia me encanto

 



Author's Response: thank you, so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this isn't what I expected at all! I can see Ken being worried that Jun was raped and wanting to know, and I can even see him lashing out at Joe momentarily, but it seems as if there's more going on here. If Ken was really that upset, then why did he 'consent' for Joe and Jun to 'be together' in the first place? Something's not adding up, and I'm curious to see what it is... 

I'm curious about this mission and how Jun defied Ken and why...

The only thing that doesn't sit right with me is this 'stress relief' thing where practically the whole team is getting involved. That just seems off from what I'd expect... certanly they should all be able to exhibit some self-control, enough to find appropriate partners. Again, this incongruity is leading me to wonder what's really going on behind the scenes... can't wait to find out!



Author's Response: Do we actually see Ken "consenting"? It's been Jun instigating the whole thing, and to be fair, Ryu isn't involved, he just had the option to be if he felt left out... he basically wanted to know what was really going on. Can you really imagine things ending well?

Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

I can understand why Ken's so upset, especially if he feared she'd been raped. All that angst from the fear would then get transferred onto Joe's head. Really, though, it seems like it's Jun who's pushing all of it, and she took advantage of Joe rather than the other way around. I do have to wonder with all that tech how she got sloppy enough to get pregnant. :)

Enjoying the drama and curious to see where it goes. There is a follow-up, right? *grin* 



Author's Response: Yes! I wondered if anyone would pick up on that! :P Glad you are enjoying the stories so far, and as for a third installment......

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. What an ending to that story, KT. It's amazing how many people forget the rule 'it only takes once'.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Sadly though, you're right, too many young girls get caught through ignorance or misinformation, "we only did it once" or "I didn't think it would happen to me" are both too common phrases these days....

Reviewer: K2p2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Tidy edition to the series KT.  Loved how you worked the back story into it and Joe's plausible, if not possible regret...

Although within the realms of this tale, I am not sure how he could have done things differently, other than to stand up more to Ken. 



Author's Response: Thank you, I always appreciate honest and straightforward comments like that! :)

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