Date: 07/23/2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh, no! I can't believe this is the end! What a wonderful finale though. The action scene was INTENSE! Now, I want to see how Ken manages with life in G-Town ^___^ Ken angst! Some of the best stuff there is!!
Author's Response: Hehehe ... I've started the next Raven story, so it's not quite the end :)
Date: 05/08/2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
This has been a great story, Chris. Ravn did become a distinct characters of his own. I coudn't decide if I was coming to like him or not. Ken coming to the forefront for a while shows he's still viable. I hope there's more to this story.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I'm working on the next part. :)
Date: 04/29/2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh wow!Chris this is so ... wow, I just can't find the words. I am completely blown away.
The emotions, and interaction between Joe and Ken and Joe and the Raven are very moving. I love the way you are able to write these emotions with so few words and yet make me really feel them. I keep hoping I am able to do the same.
I am really looking forward to reading about Ken's continued healing and perhaps a joining of the fragments of Ken and Raven.
Sorry I keep deleting because I keep forgetting to rate the stories I coment on.
Author's Response: Aw shucks. Glad you liked it!
Date: 04/29/2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
Perhaps as a beta I should't review -- I don't the etiquette for this situation -- but, hey, I liked it, and wanted to let you know! The interaction between the Condor and the Raven is complex, subtle, emotional, and, at times (for me at least), even moving.
Author's Response: I won't complain about a review. :) And thanks! That would make a good title: "The Condor and the Raven"