Date: 06/27/2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This one popped up at random on the front page and I'm so glad it did! I would've missed it! Such an honest, fascinating scenario. My dad nearly died from peritonitis when he was a kid, so it really hit home. Poor Tiny! What I really enjoyed about this story was the care and concern that Jason had for Tiny. We don't often see the two of them interact. Great wrk on this!
Date: 06/05/2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Tiny! Catherine, this is well researched, a tense read, and fits well into your existing arc. My favorite part in here is the subtle interaction between Jason and Mark, the former learning to read the latter's body language and adapting to his commander's new limitations. Crossing my fingers for the big guy's recovery. It just wouldn't be the same without him.