Date: 06/19/2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lee, yet again you prove why you're an awesome writer!
Your creativity, your grasp of characters, your ability to write in any genre and get it right - the very crafting of your sentences... You have a natural talent that shines through every word.
And who can forget the twists you find for every scenario? I totally love how you keep us guessing - even beyond the end of the story!
Date: 06/18/2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sneaky. :) I was wondering why she didn't pummel them when they admitted they thought they were reading her journal. Of course, now you leave us wondering who "he" really is. *grin*
(you refer to Ken a couple of times in there, just FYI)