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Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

I was feeling a little blue and came back to read this, and it made me smile again. This really is an excellent story, lborgia. Romantic and angsty with teens who are unsure of themselves, but also are responsible for the fate of an entire Federation of planets. :)

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Date: 07/30/2012 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wohooooo!!!!! lol  it's nice story and love how Mark is willing to keep the relationship with Jason :3 (But oh boy, Poor Don lol lol)  <-it's CondorJun btw- couldn't change my ID for some reason :s :3  it's always great to see your writings :) :) I love all your stuffs!!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Great to see you over here from Deviant Art!  The request was for Ken/Joe or Mark/Jason, and as I was already at sea in unknown, challenging waters with either pairing, I figured I'd go for the one that seemed the hardest to me, and the least-explored by others.  It was trying to figure out how to work around the fact that Mark and Jason don't seem particularly close in BOTP (to me, anyway -certainly compared to Ken and Joe) that got a story idea forming...

Reviewer: Pip Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2012 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

This was incredible! I love the way Jason's POV gave us all the details until Mark explains it at the end. Oh, and this is the second story I've read lately with a not-so-nice Anderson! He really does control the lives of the team completely. Wow! Many thanks for posting this!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you think the structure, filling in details by jumping back and forth from present to past, worked.  As for Chief Anderson, I needed somebody to be the bad guy here, and he was convenient.  I don't know if I could have done it with Dr. Nambu though.

Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

I never get tired of re-reading this, lborgia. :) It's beautifully done, ties in so well to behind the scenes canon, and I'd never have guessed this was your first slash. A totally awesome gift!

Author's Response: Thank you!  That's the neat thing about these Gift Exchanges -they can get you writing something that would otherwise never have occurred to you to try.

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