Date: 06/25/2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
I read both piece in one day. The only disappointing part - no third story. I could have sworn I saw the start of it!
I agree, there's so much emotional material for the Princess/Mark reunion. I see angst ahead as they both come to terms with what's happened.
Author's Response: And I apologize for taking so long, but the next fic iis up! That's my fault for being slow. I had it written ages ago but never had the chance to sit down and properly edit.
Date: 09/22/2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I found this to be an interesting story that was engaging and thoughtful. The technology descriptions reminded me that their technology is advanced rather than it being just another prison. The insight into your universe and Spectra society is also interesting. For me I found it odd that Princess thought Mark would reject her after her ordeal. To me that doesn't seem likely, but perhaps this will be resolved in part 3. :)
Whether or not it is likely, you have to consider the 'conditions' Princess is being subjected to. She's still very young and never really had a real relationship, so she has no 'experience' in these matters. Add to that the ohysical, mental and emotional stress she's under just as part of her daily life, and adding to that the attacks on her person she has undergone... she's not necessarily thinking with the clearest head.
As for what happens when she gets back... yes, that is the last fic in the trilogy, which will be posted soon.
Date: 09/20/2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it when I read it in Bird Scramble, and I'm loving it now! It's one of the most emotional fics I've read.
Author's Response: I'm glad it encouoraged an emootional response. I really wanted to show what Princess was goiung through, not just physically, but emotionally as well.