Date: 12/02/2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved Mark comforting Jason at the end. Jason's discover of his homosexuality is touching. The hints throughout the story give away the final chapter. You're almost anxiously awaiting the confrontation and devastation you know is coming. Drawing the compassion between Marks situation with Princess and the one he'd just witnessed is extremely powerful and makes us feel for the leader. That he can read Jason, feel his pain and know the future displays his true leadership skills.
Date: 12/21/2008 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow. I'm not into m/m, but this was a powerful story. Well done.
Author's Response: I don't often do M/M in the BotP fandom (Gatch - different. Ken and Joe are such a couple!) but Jason's reaction to seeing Zoltar unmasked was so shocked, that I had to find an explaination. And my slightly evil sense of humor had to take his talent for getting involved with Spectran spies just that one step further...