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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For A not so happy Christmas
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Reviewer: jublke Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2013 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your portrayal of Joe. Some of the dialogue between Joe and Ken really flowed well. I liked the detail of the macaroni cards and how Joe kept every lousy gift that Ken ever gave him. :)

Reviewer: Clouddancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can see this a following on from Broken Chld, explaining further why Ken does not feel good about himself.

And with that hurt Ken in mind, once you mentioned it, I could really see him loving plushies.  They would provide a kind of unconditional love and warmth he felt he was not getting from a real person.

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