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Reviewer: Cricket Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh dear. I wonder if this is going to cause problems.

Reviewer: Chris White Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Why do I imagine Jason waking up in a sweat, shrieking, and going "oh god that was awful ... the Chief HUGGING me?" :)

Author's Response: LOL! Well, this story is all your fault you know. :P You made that comment while betaing Caldera Madre - I wonder what else the Chief isn't telling Mark - and that just stuck in my head and rattled around until this popped up. If it helps any, I suspect it was a very brief, stiff, awkward little huglet. Not even a real gushy hug at all. ;)

Reviewer: Kuroi Okami Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ok, so I'm not the only one! I have enjoyed all your stories!

Author's Response: Hi Kuroi! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. I'm glad you like my stories. :)

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2013 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

Julie, I loved this in Bird Scramble and like you and others, often thought of the relationship between the Chief and Jason being more than just canon. I can't wait to see how you incorporate this into your AU.

Author's Response: Hi Becky. Glad you liked it! I'm not sure where this one is headed, but I suspect a heart-to-heart between Jason and Mark has to happen at some point. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: KT1972 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was short but sweet, Jublke, I'm so glad it worked out well for them both!

Author's Response: Thanks, KT! I'm still trying to picture Mark's shock when Jason tells him ...

Reviewer: Lyssa Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

This must have been a challenge for Jason. I've not read your other stories so it stands very well on it's own. It also makes me want to go and find out about Mark's parentage.

Author's Response: Hi Lyssa - Thanks for the review. If you're interested in my take on Mark's parentage, try Caldera Madre. I'm not quite finished with it, but I'm getting there.

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