Date: 01/05/2015 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Questions
Poor Joe! That was so sad! A part of me wonders whether Ken would've done the same if Red Impulse was the cyborg. And I liked the idea of turning the concept of Joe as a cyborg on its head and using it for his father.
Plus that dream, in the beginning of the fic... Wow!
Date: 01/02/2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Release
Poor Joe, I really felt for him throughout this fic. Seems he cannot catch a break.
Well done for submitting your first fic, Mylari, and hope to see many more from you in the future :)