Date: 09/26/2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice flipping of roles as one gets sick and the other gets better. It didn't feel as if you got them sick just to make them confess. It's a good story even without the romance. (I like stories that have a strong romance component, but romance alone will not enough to hold my interest.)
Good explanation (smiling) why Mark and Princess act as if they're together. Princess's support for Mark fits her personality (even though in my universe they get together). Novel reason for Jason's lack of success with women. I also like that they aren't rushing into it. Maybe Mark is assuming a bit much, but the romance will (or won't) develop at a realistic speed. Not confess on Monday, marry on Tuesday, divorce on Wednesday.
Date: 01/05/2015 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was great -- one of the very fics that could make me accept a Mark/Jason pairing -- as others have said, this is much, much easier to see in Gatch than in BoTP! And I really liked the little detail about Princess and the drummer!