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Reviewer: Grumpy Ghost Owl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2016 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice little vignette :) Jason's sarcasm is very much in-character. As usual, you've nailed it.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seriously! I can just see Jason wanting to jump off that bridge LOL.

Hope we see more from you soon!

Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can just see Jason's eyes gleaming with hope that an order from Mark would let him escape traffic in style. He might regret it later though!

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

He must have oicked u the top-seret item near Washingtoo DC. There are times when I wish i could call in the teeam to just lift my car up out of the traffic and dump it oast the problem.

 I agree that you're saying a lot here with few words. 

Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

I will remember this the next time I am stuck in traffic!
I love how in just a few short sentences the characters come through.

Tell me there is more coming? (hint hint)

Author's Response:

Thanks Nephedra!

More? Probably not for this particular little scene. In general? Sure :)

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