Date: 12/20/2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
So that's how Al got dragged into the insanity! I love her reaction to Keyop and Anderson, the 'suit'. I also like the way the team surveys the damage they helped cause and leave with the determination not to let it happen again.
Thanks for reviewing, Becky. Glad you enjoyed the story. :)
Date: 12/20/2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow, a lovely early Christmas present!
Much enjoyed this. I like Al Jones a lot and this was a very plausible tale of how she gets involved with Anderson.
Loved Jason critiquing Tiny's piloting strategies and complaining about seatbelts (I guess they get fitted as a result of his complaints :). And Action Anderson. And, well all of it really!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Catherine. I don't know that seatbelts ever really did get fitted to the Phoenix. Maybe if JJ Abrams directs a reboot we'll get them (along with lens flare.)
Date: 12/11/2015 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
"I'm sane!" Jason declared, grinning manically. "And I have a piece of paper that says so!" This has got to be one of my all time favorite lines! :-D
Poor Keyop, he wants so much to be seen as an equal to his older teammates.
Bang up job. You managed to capture the voices of the canon cast at the same time you've made them yours.
Good to see you doing some writing again. Looking forward to the next piece.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Kat. :) Not everyone has an actual piece of paper to say that they're sane.