[Report This]Date: 07/08/2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh! Read it again, just For fun and love it!
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved the ending to this. There were some wonderful scenes in here, very clever. I'm also looking forward to a sequel!
Date: 02/26/2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
OMG. LOL forever!! You must write a sequel. Please??
Date: 02/26/2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
I was pretty sure we’d dealt with the millipede before the race, but everything was jumbled up in this crazy universe...
Oh. Dear. I'm glad I'm not drinking anything; I would have choked to death laughing by now!
Date: 02/26/2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
"This is some crazy…rewrite, I don't know."
Ell. Oh. Ell. FOREVER.
Date: 02/26/2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
He was like a crazy old lady on crack. I couldn't wait to see what 1-Rover-1 looked like. OMG. I am laughing So. Hard.
Date: 06/21/2009 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
The robot’s antennae shot straight up in the air, quivering. “Oh, Susan!” He giggled. I have no idea how one programs a robot to giggle. “I hope I’m not…interrupting something,” she breathed. She sounded like a phone sex operator. “I just…wanted to make sure you got…the message I sent…on your monitors,” she said. I wondered if she’d sent him porn.
and...
He was like a crazy old lady on crack.
Too funny!!
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2007 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ow - I'm hurting from laughing! I just loved Mark being prissy about Joe swearing, and Joe getting all the terms "wrong".
Please tell me there is a sequel to this! Two sequels! I want to see Jason in the Gatchaman universe and how Joe reacts to being called Dirk Daring.
Author's Response:
Thanks, everybody!
I'm kind of thinking who I'd like to land in the Eagle Riders universe.
"Eagle Riders, what's our mission?"
"To defend the global good!"
Joe: *face-palm* "Someone please shoot me..."
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2007 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh, this is fun. Full of laugh-out-loud moments and an excellent punchline. One of my favorite lines: "You know, where I come from, we call that training."
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2007 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
An amusing little romp through the multiverse. I liked the succinct explanation of Shroedinger's Cat. The ending was brilliant. Don't forget to add this to the 'Dark and Stormy Night' challenge listing!