Date: 05/27/2007 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this on the BOTP list, and am looking forward to the next piece in your overall plotline. I have to confess that, for me, the most interesting part was what happened with Don. I'm waiting to see what he does with that luminous paint... ;-)
Date: 05/26/2007 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Another excellent story from you, Catherine. I've already given you my nitpick on the BotP List, so I'll just be Nice here and commend you on your exemplary technical skills, good pacing, strong characterisation, believable dialogue and decent plot.
As a stand-alone story, it doesn't tell a whole lot of story, per se, but it does advance the arc. I very much enjoy the depth and complexity of your series as a whole. I look forward to more instalments.