Reviews For Lost Visual Contact
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Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this take on what was REALLY going on ... war is a dark thing.

Reviewer: kittenmommy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is chillingly plausible.  I'll never watch BoTP the same way again! D:


Reviewer: Candi Gomez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Considering Zoltar was operating (and abusing) on the presumption that G-Force were some kind of robot, and that view just went down the disposal, I think he's going to be doing some serious thinking.

I like how Anderson was allowed a hand in the revenge when he smashed Rover. And Princess seems to have brought home to Zark that mind-wiping is not the same as resetting a hard drive. Not that I think the little bleep would've learned anything; I think that he'd just have tried using the cerebonics to mess with their unconscious minds as well.

This is the third creepiest ever Zark story I've ever read.*


1st creepiest freakiest Zark ficm IMHO? TransmuteJun's "A Place on the Team".

Author's Response: Zark missed the entire point, and I don't believe he'd ever understand. He's too much a robot to understand why making one forget does nothing to help the victim of the trauma. Zoltar got an unexpected shock, and his 'childish glee' in playing with what he thought of as toys will haunt him big time. I never explored what or how that universe turned out beyond this story though...

Reviewer: UnpublishedWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

A decent ending.

Wonder what Zoltar does with his new understanding?

Author's Response: Thanks. As for Zoltar... I never really thought so far. Just gave the idea that he was a decent enough being after all to feel guilty about what he had done to Mark.

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