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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For A Dark and Stormy Night
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Reviewer: Julieann Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice response to the challenge! I like Jinpei's idea of how to destroy the mecha while he's trying to tackle it alone and stay alive at the same time. Also very good work with the descriptions and movement. I was able to follow it in my head very easily. :)

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