Date: 05/06/2013 11:43 PM Title: A Dark and Stormy Night
I thought I had reviewed this before...I loved every minute of it! The almost proposal wasn't too sappy...but it conveyed his emotions so well! I loved the smooth transitions between couples, too...a fun read!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm relieved that the almost-proposal wasn't sappy. Fluff is not my forte, I'm afraid, so any reader whose gag reflex isn't triggered is a plus. :)
Date: 08/12/2012 9:29 PM Title: A Dark and Stormy Night
I read this back when we did the challenge, but I enjoyed it even more now that I've read some of your other pieces and gotten to know your OCs a little better. Love how you tied all of the threads together by the end. And it's nice to see Anderson has met his match. :)
Author's Response: Quite possibly this is one of the fluffiest things I've ever written. I think I enjoyed destroying the Toyota Comet in much the same way as Jeremy Clarkson enjoys destroying Morris Marinas. If only I could have found a way to drop a piano on it instead of a tree... Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing.
Date: 11/14/2008 4:14 PM Title: A Dark and Stormy Night
I love this story. You worked the challenge in so many times, and it fit. The story flowed well. Major Jones is one of my all time favorite original characters. She adds another dimension that I find very interesting.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks, cyscoe.
I'm glad old Bert is fulfilling her purpose. It may be argued (successfully and accurately) that she is in fact a screaming Mary Sue because despite the fact that I've tried very hard to make her outwardly nothing like me, she still embodies my inner voice from time to time. Possibly the one I tend to ignore when it says, "You do realise that this is a really stupid idea."
Date: 08/11/2008 11:47 PM Title: A Dark and Stormy Night
I LOVE THIS!!!!
And that last three-way exchange between Anderson, Jones, and Keyop...ROFLMHO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Candi. That last exchange was probably the hardest to write so I value your comments. Thanks.