Date: 08/12/2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
This piece is charming, witty and delightful, laden with details that add depth to the characters without detracting from the plot. I would have liked to see the thread about the games wrapped up, but I can almost overlook it because the scene on the rooftop is priceless. Nicely done. :)
Author's Response: I'm afraid I painted myself in to a corner with the war games thread. Maybe some day, with a lot of technical advice. Thanks for your review.
Date: 11/14/2008 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my... Now I'm picturing the condor actually dressed as Cupid. This is a delightful read!
Author's Response: The mental image of a Condor -- any Condor -- dressed as Cupid is a frightening thought. Thanks for your feedback. Much appreciated.