Date: 08/06/2008 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excuse me while I get my breath back....
Now first of all, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for taking out about 90% of the Austin Powers smut! You left just enough in for flavor so that it works. And Joe/Jason hooking up with Ken/Mark's daughter...only here!
I had to stop several times for ROFLMHO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Especially when Mark calls himself Ace Goodheart...choke...gasp... I'm ok, I'm ok. :-D
A little heavy on the '70s slang, but that that's my opinion and I know how hard these things can be to judge. :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, I went a little overboard on the slang. But I was trying to slap the reader in the face with the AU. My first draft didn't have so much, and people tended to start slipping back into the BOTP universe mindframe if I didn't remind them that this was something different, KWIM? But I'm glad you enjoyed it. I HAD to throw in Ace Goodheart. What other cover name would he use? *grin*