Date: 08/16/2008 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aggie!? Aggie!?! ROFLMHO!!! I love this!
The last chapter is esp. classic. And the fanfic ramifications of both G-Forces existing in the same universe...loads of fun to be had by all!
Incredible writing, keeping in suspense, and surprise ending: all the things that make for great literature.
It threw me a bit at the three different POVs of the Swan(s), but that was quickly and clearly resolved, and is no cause for complaint.
Author's Response: You know, the funny thing is that Springie and I ahd tosse around the idea of doing a Princess/Aggie sequel, but we never had a good plot come to mind. Any idea? ;-)