Date: 12/22/2009 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice rewrite of that first episode. G-Force is actually dangerous. (The Sandy Frank people would have fits.)
Author's Response: Thanks. I really hate to say this, but this *is* BotP -- no violence added, nothing taken away, just seen from the perspective of the Spectrans. It only looks so different because it's not the POV of the Chemical Ali of the cartoon world. :D But still, I thank you.