Date: 09/26/2007 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
Springie I really love your stories!
I enjoy looking at the screen pics you have taken the time to put in with them, I know how much trouble you take to do this so it is apreciated I bet from many readers...
I know piccies are from the series, and they represent only a moment, and the rest is up to the imagination...you are a very creative person and please keep up the good work!
And your beautiful hand drawings as well add to the story...just close your eyes, and picture the drawing coming to life, isn't that what art is all about!
Author's Response: Thanks, Ebony! It does take quite some time to put in the pictures, but it is so much fun! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/16/2007 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this too. It was plausible that Spectra would contaminate the make-up and I loved the idea of Spectra bringing on killer bees and the Phoenix having to go firey to escape them.
Most of the screen caps really added to the story, but there were a couple that didn't match up with the text and I found those to be distracting (Ken bleeding from a different place in the image versus the text, for example).
I did wonder about the Eagle and Swan's long range potential here ... we see a lot more of Joe and Jun connecting than Ken and Jun. But perhaps that's my Condor bias showing. ;-)
Overall, a solid read. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it...sorry some of the screencaps don't match.I may take a few out...the ones that bug me are the ones in the last chapter, where they are still wearing civvies.But I mainly look at facial expression when I choose a pic.I may fiddle with it a bit...
Date: 07/11/2007 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a really fun idea, and I love the swooniness you've put into it! You're always so good at that kind of thing!
Joe saving Jun when she falls is the stuff my late-night dreams are made of (Shh.... don't tell my Eagle!) and I love
Ken's angst, especially knowing that there's got to be a happy ending for him and Jun...doesn't there? ;-)
Author's Response: *grin* You know how I *hate* angst...and swoony endings! LOL