Date: 08/20/2008 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like! Poor Kito. It's interesting how those goons' big mouths were the eventual cause of that defeat. And how Kito never forgot his best friends...He could have made second in command to Katze with the information he had, but he held it in his heart because he treasured his memories of her so.
It's interesting to think about what might have happened if Nambu had adopted Kito. He probably wouldn't have made the team, but with his skills designing their gear...!
That would be an interesting what-if fic, to see what Kito's life would've been like in the world of the ISO. I sometimes do that, dual stories based on a character's choices or the events in their lives...multi-AUs are great for that. I'd offer to do one for Kito, but I stink at dealing with other people's OCs'.
You are an excellent writer. And thank you for commenting on Alpha & Omega. I really appreciate it!
Well, we know that the average goon isn't that bright, so it's their stupid mistakes that often lead to their own defeat. And it was more than their loose lips. Let's not forget the bright boys who let Jinpei slip away and then recovered him without checking into what he had been doing! ITA it's interesing to think about what COULD have happened to Kito. But then, that's why THIS story was one I wanted to write. The way he started out the same as Jun and Jinpei but ended up somewhere totally different... Nambu only got to adopt four kids, and of those, only two were from an orphanage (the other two kind of fell into his lap). They were the 'lucky' ones, so what happened to everyone else?
But now I digress.This is the only fic I've ever written with the major character being original, so it's one I'm often uncertain about. It's good to knwo that you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/17/2007 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I already reviewed this one over on the ML - but I'll review it again, because it was that good!
A believable goon who has more to him than comedy relief but isn't a cackling bad guy either. I'd say more, but I don't want to post spoilers...I loved it.
Date: 07/15/2007 6:08 AM Title: Epilogue
I like the poster for it...which one is Kito??
This is a fun story to read, I just like the way that TJ has done her goon in a way that makes him human in his goofy moments(and who does not make stupid decisions at one point in thier life especially as a teenager.)
But Kito was a person that Jun may have been friends with at one point in her life because they had a common interest.
I like that he starts out so normal and in the same place as the birdies but takes a totally different path, but want significance. He just goes about it all wrong.
The classic is the way he gets promoted...a must read for the person who is looking for a fic from the other side...
Great story TJ...
Which one is Kito in the poster? You'll have to ask Springie, since she made it! *grin*
I'm glad you liked it! This was a bit of a stretch for me (in terms of my writing abilities) and I'm happy that it turned out as well as it did.