Date: 07/31/2007 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story from the Swan's POV.
I kept waiting for the Chief to pull Mark aside and give him the 'Fraternization' talk. Would have liked to see how Mark would respond to that.
I see the conection to TJ's Tough to Swallow story. You two do a good job writing from different perspectives.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks, Cloud! It is tough to coordinate, but well worth the effort. It's fun to collaborate with TJ, too. We may have another collaboration coming sometime in the future. Stay tuned! ;-)