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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For Galactor
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Reviewer: Springie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2007 4:43 PM Title: Galactor

Loved it, baybee!! My favorite lines are..."A flood of green
Pouring out of the mouth of some strange creature"...very graphic!!  I think you should do more poetry!!

Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 2:33 AM Title: Galactor

It is simple, but it tells the story...I am not expert on poetry but to me I feel the coming storm with the line "Pouring out of the mouth of some strange creature"

I can see the team standing there ready to take them on! Poetry is not easy, but then TJ you have shown yourself to be good at creating pictures with words. 

 

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