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Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ugh, I cringed when she pulled that arm out of the rubble. *shudder*

I really enjoyed Mark & Jason's interaction in this one. And I can see them having this conversation in my mind. It's interesting because I'm not sure if I can see your AU's Ken and Joe talking to each other quite like this.
Maybe they were able to in the past....

Good stuff, Becky! :)

Author's Response: You're reading all of it! No, I don't think Ken and Joe would. Gatch is so much darker than BotP. I saw Mark and Jason being more affected by the horror of the situation.

Reviewer: jublke Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

I agree with all of the other reviews - a nice slice of your AU.

Author's Response: Thanks Julie. The idea actually came from a nightmare I'd had after hearing a story from the Haiti earthquake.

Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Now I'm really trying to picture the Asakura brothers ... I can honestly picture Joe holding Jason down and MAKING him take vitamins, hehe.

Author's Response: I wanted Joe to be Gatch Joe and Jason to be softer, more fun loving, but he's got to have a serious side, too. Joe making Jason take his vitamins...hmmmmm...

Reviewer: vaniahepskins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi! Recently i have discover this story, i like the way you portrait the scene, very real. Excuse me my english. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, Van (I shorten everyhting). I'm glad you enjoyed it and your English is fine.

Reviewer: Dragonsbain Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Everyone reacts differently to shooting other people and being shot. Very realistic reactions out of Mark and Jason.

Author's Response: I wanted to show both the horrors of war and how that makes those fighting it closer.

Reviewer: Clouddancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can't believe I have not reviewed this story. 

You can feel the connection and caring that exist between Mark and Jason.

Author's Response: Sorry I mussed this review, CD. That's what I wanted to show. Glad it worked.

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