Date: 03/29/2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ugh, I cringed when she pulled that arm out of the rubble. *shudder*
I really enjoyed Mark & Jason's interaction in this one. And I can see them having this conversation in my mind. It's interesting because I'm not sure if I can see your AU's Ken and Joe talking to each other quite like this.
Maybe they were able to in the past....
Good stuff, Becky! :)
Author's Response: You're reading all of it! No, I don't think Ken and Joe would. Gatch is so much darker than BotP. I saw Mark and Jason being more affected by the horror of the situation.
Date: 02/26/2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Now I'm really trying to picture the Asakura brothers ... I can honestly picture Joe holding Jason down and MAKING him take vitamins, hehe.
Author's Response: I wanted Joe to be Gatch Joe and Jason to be softer, more fun loving, but he's got to have a serious side, too. Joe making Jason take his vitamins...hmmmmm...
Date: 09/21/2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! Recently i have discover this story, i like the way you portrait the scene, very real. Excuse me my english. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you, Van (I shorten everyhting). I'm glad you enjoyed it and your English is fine.
Date: 08/17/2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Everyone reacts differently to shooting other people and being shot. Very realistic reactions out of Mark and Jason.
Author's Response: I wanted to show both the horrors of war and how that makes those fighting it closer.
Date: 02/14/2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't believe I have not reviewed this story.
You can feel the connection and caring that exist between Mark and Jason.
Author's Response: Sorry I mussed this review, CD. That's what I wanted to show. Glad it worked.