Date: 03/10/2008 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Transmute Jun, I was *so* glad that you got this challenge piece instead of me! I wasn't even sure who the man was. And you did a great job with him, giving him motivation and credibility in an engaging story. Congrats!
Author's Response: LOL, that was about my response when I got this assignment... why me? This wasn't an easy one for me, but then, that was the point of the challenge, wasn't it? I'm glad you enjoyed the fic though. Honestly, I was unsure as to how well this one turned out.
Date: 03/04/2008 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I remember this character well, as his competence and dedication to Galactor were unusually strong. The motivations and back story that you've given him fit so well. And, once again, Joe has to deal with the consequences of his family history -this story would have made an excellent Gatchaman episode!
Well, the Condor was an obvious choice, because of his Galactor family background (that the agent clearly would have found repugnant) and because it was Joe's gun that 'killed' him. I knew that if I didn't tie it more directly into the KNT then it wasn't going to be that interesting a fic. Glad you enjoyed it!