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Reviewer: Candi Gomez Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awwww...I really like this!

And this shows why the chief strengths lay in the combined abilities of the entire team, not just one or two.

That said, Hunter needs to get off his high freakin' horse. It's okay for him to change orders on the fly but not for anyone else? Even when civilians are involved? What is it with Eagles!?!



Author's Response:

Hunter is definitely high-strung.It's like he doesn't trust himself as leader, and after the first few episodes of the series, it's easy to see why... he messes up on more than one judgment call. Then Joe returns and Joe constantly runs off, always having private information, and he never shares anything with the rest of the Team. It's pretty natural that this would bother Hunter even more. 

But yeah, despite this, they're still a Team and they need to work together... and Joe needs to realize this.  

Reviewer: lborgia88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Joe+angst+romance is an irresistable combination for me!  Kudos for writing in the Eagle Riders universe -I'm not familiar with it, so it was interesting to see its differences.

Author's Response: This was my first ER fic. I've seen the whole series, but never thought about using it before. But the nice thing about that universe is that there's no chemistry at all between Hunter and Kelly, and LOTS of implied chemistry between Joe and Kelly, so that angle works much better. *grin*

Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

Quote; 

"A small flame flickered inside of Kelly, steadily growing stronger as Joe carefully tended to it, until it burned of its own accord, being sustained by the physical and emotional response the Dove was having to the Falcon’s actions."

That is why you write romance so well TJ...need I say to much more, it has a good flow and plot to the story... 

 

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