Date: 03/24/2008 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
There's a real sense that they're losing this war and know it, and I could absolutely buy Jun starting to resent the people they're trying to protect.
I know it wasn't the request - but what I most liked about this wasn't the romance bits at all, it was Jun growing a spine and refusing to allow Ken to carry on being a one man team. There's a reason there are five of them. But Joe's reasoning made perfect sense too, in an ice-cold way - he'd rather lose one of them than both. Brr. The fandom could use a whole lot more fic set in the later series...especially when it's this good.
Date: 03/20/2008 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I forgot to leave my thoughts on this...
I give it 11/10 for sexual tension! I'm need a cold bath after reading that story from the heat wave it generated.
On a more serious note; You write a very good story, clear and good with descriptive words that work well... :)
Date: 03/12/2008 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bravo! You made my wee little 'shipper heart pitter patter with joy! I loved the raw emotions you gave to them when they were talking things out in the hallway and conference room. And Joe deliberately pushing Ken's buttons...encraoching on his territory...so Condor-esque!
"You're being deliberately dense." This is so true...I'm glad Jun finally called him out on it!
You did a great job with this one, Eva!
Date: 03/12/2008 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
ROTFL! Only YOU could turn a Condor/Swan request into an Eagle/Swan request! *Snicker*... but this had me on the edge of my seat and rooting for Jun the entire time. I'm glad that she finally got her happy ending. Yay!