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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For Sacrifices
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Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man now THAT is an angry sex scene, wonderfully rough and even absurd with the worry about the dry erase marker. :) And I can totally see Ken being super extra pissed they were fooling around in his plane.

Reviewer: Madilayn Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh.. Like this Eva!!  For once Ken takes the stick out of his arse and does somthing for himself!!  Lovely!!

Reviewer: cathrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent!

There's a real sense that they're losing this war and know it, and I could absolutely buy Jun starting to resent the people they're trying to protect.

I know it wasn't the request - but what I most liked about this wasn't the romance bits at all, it was Jun growing a spine and refusing to allow Ken to carry on being a one man team. There's a reason there are five of them. But Joe's reasoning made perfect sense too, in an ice-cold way - he'd rather lose one of them than both. Brr. The fandom could use a whole lot more fic set in the later series...especially when it's this good.

Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2008 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

I forgot to leave my thoughts on this...

I give it 11/10 for sexual tension! I'm need a cold bath after reading that story from the heat wave it generated.

On a more serious note; You write a very good story, clear and good with descriptive words that work well... :) 

 

 

Reviewer: lborgia88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, Eva.  You know how to cut right to the heart of what makes us tick as humans, and how to convey it skillfully, without a single unnecessary word.

Reviewer: Springie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bravo! You made my wee little 'shipper heart pitter patter with joy! I loved the raw emotions you gave to them when they were talking things out in the hallway and conference room. And Joe deliberately pushing Ken's buttons...encraoching on his territory...so Condor-esque!

"You're being deliberately dense."   This is so true...I'm glad Jun finally called him out on it! 

 

You did a great job with this one, Eva! 

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

ROTFL! Only YOU could turn a Condor/Swan request into an Eagle/Swan request! *Snicker*... but this had me on the edge of my seat and rooting for Jun the entire time. I'm glad that she finally got her happy ending. Yay!

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