Date: 05/18/2007 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was wonderful! What a great detailed look at the BC Island episode! I love the way you portrayed Jinpei, struggling with his guilt. My favorite part was the conversation between Joe and Jinpei at the end, "I'll teach you a few other things, you little shit-" and "Onechan says you have six degrees of scowl."cracked me up!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! This was actually my first attempt writing fanfic, and the story wrote itself like Jinpei was babbling in my ear.