Date: 08/18/2008 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
This fic works so, so well in so many ways: a fresh and creative premise, an ample length that enables the establishment of a detailed and fully realized setting and a story on a larger, richer scale, and a mystery that both reveals clues and leaves the reader insatiable for the next part.
Wow... you deserve every cent I paid you! J/k.... I'm blown away by your words! It really makes me feel happy to know that you feel that way about my story. I can only hope that the rest of the series lives up to your expectations
Date: 08/15/2008 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
TJ this is a great story. I love how you take us through a huge range of emotions. And reveal little tidbits of information along the way. I am looking forward to what comes next.
Author's Response: And it wouldn't be nearly as good without my wonderful beta reader! *hug*
Date: 08/15/2008 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is so suspenseful and romatinc . . . I get excited every day looking for new chapters and now I am desperate for the next installment in the series. It makes me think of those old-time radio serials. Artfully done and a wonderful read!
Author's Response: Desperate? Oh no! *grin* Thanks for the compliment! I'll be posting the sequel soon.
Date: 08/13/2008 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Just read all 12 chapters and I am enjoying this fanfic immensely...Curious, will Mark find the other members of G-Force???.....HMMM..Cannot wait for further chapters.......
Author's Response: There's a lot more togo! This fic will finish posting shortly, but it's the beginning of a series. I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Date: 08/09/2008 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
This really has me guessing what will happen next. I can hardly wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are guessing! That is what I hoped the reader would feel, so it's good to know that I have created the environment I was aiming for.