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Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2017 4:31 AM Title: Competing With Baby

Thats a great ending..Some has a crush on the big guy and he doesn't even know it. 

Reviewer: Springie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2013 1:12 AM Title: Competing With Baby

Awesome! The Owl has an admirer! I am rooting for Gina in this one! I hope Henry got what he deserved, too! 

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! Yeah, it was nice to have the attention on the Owl for a change. :D

Reviewer: Madilayn Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2010 5:22 AM Title: Competing With Baby

Oh lovely!!  WE get to see the Owl's chivalrous side, and also you can see that he watches everything that happens with his Phoenix.

Author's Response: I can see the Owl as veeeeery possessive of his bird. ;)

Reviewer: ghost owl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 7:41 PM Title: Competing With Baby

At last G-5 gets some attention. Mind you, he seems fairly successful, if somewhat awkward, in canon. You write the female protagonist very sympathetically without getting all self-insertion-y so a big bouquet of marigolds to you!

Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2008 10:59 PM Title: Competing With Baby

This is very good and with a twist too. I like it that she's not after G-1 or G-2. Its time the Owl got a girl making it unpredictable. For me this story isn't finished, so I gather you have more coming.

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2008 3:28 PM Title: Competing With Baby

That's cute. The little black dress in a good idea. Shake G-5 up a bit.

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 9:07 PM Title: Competing With Baby

Interesting... I can completely see myself in the role of the main character, and yet, she doesn't seem like a Mary Sue. She's got her flaws and knows it... and she's dealing with a messed up life like the rest of us. Interesting choice of hero too... as I'm sure you know, I had guessed that it was someone else.

Will this be continued? 



Author's Response:

Hehe, I fooled two other people on the 'hero' of the ficlet, too! :D

I'm not sure if it'll be continued. Who knows, inspiration might bite me later to continue it. We already know Tiny wants a girlfriend. Heck, I think he mentions women more than Jason! :D

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