Date: 09/20/2008 8:12 PM Title: Mothers' Day
Interesting how you have the Mother still alive into the episodes. I liked all the little details you put into this, such as the breeze, the smell of the flowers and interspersed the Mother's outer physical problems to accent just how delicate she has become. I like stories that engage the senses.
It's nice to think that Mark still has a little bit of family around. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Julie. I think Mark's mother is overlooked far too much. His father is all important to him, but we hardly ever hear a word about his mum.