Date: 03/09/2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another great one. I can see here where the transition happens from being just another group of teenagers to them being G-Force.
Author's Response: Thanks! I love thinking about their early years. Wish I had more time to write the ideas down.
Date: 11/17/2008 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
A nice pice to start with. Maybe you have more ideas about early team life or their origin?
As always, well written, and I look forward to more from you.
Author's Response: Thanks! Lots of early origin ideas...sometimes hard to get any of them to paper! ha! I am working on it...but also trying my hand at flashbacks or letters as a vehicle for providing back story.
Date: 09/20/2008 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice slice of the team's childhood training! I'm sure that their individual weapons introduction would indeed leave a big impression on all of them.
I think the sentence where Jason's box is pushed to him might be missing a comma near the end. Just a thought. :)
I like the idea of Anderson having trained enough with the weapons first that he could initially show how they worked. We don't see him in fighting mode very often, but when we do, it's obvious he isn't without some knowledge!
Author's Response: Thanks for the tip. All fixed. :) Anderson has a varied background indeed. ;) He can definitely hold his own I think. Thanks for reading and the comments!
Date: 09/20/2008 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's amazing how much insight you gave to the team in just a few short words! I really felt like I walk looking into the minds of Jason and Keyop in particular, not to mention the team mentality as a whole. This scene, while never included in the actual series, is pivotal to all canon that follows.
Author's Response: Thanks TJ! At one time this was the beginning to a whole fic idea, but I could never get it to go anywhere. This challenge was perfect to dust this off and freshen it up a bit.